Film analysis process feedback
Charlie
Well done, both analysis are Level 4 / A grade. You responded to feedback and improved use of ICT in the layout (although one of bold colours doesn't show up very well). Good technical observations. To improve, revisit representation again and ensure you reference specific shots to back up observations as it feels a little general.
Amelia
It is interesting to see the extra posts you put up demonstrating a range of film inspirations, however you have not posted second analysis. Please do so ASAP and email me to confirm. You must adhere to deadlines in order to access Level 4 for planning.
Emma
You have still not responded to my first feedback with pointers for improving your analysis and you have not uploaded the second textual analysis. Please do so ASAP and email me to confirm. You must be more organised to access Level 4 for planning.
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