Sunday, 1 December 2013

Feedback 1 - Mrs Fernandez

Well done, this is shaping up to be a Level 4 blog at this early stage.  Your preliminary task shows real progression in practical skills.

Film analysis 1 feedback:
1. Charlie - yours is excellent, L4, very thorough and technical.  Now work on layout using ICT to highlight key terms, stills
2. Amelia - also L4 in terms of analysis, very useful shot to analyse, however go back to representation/ideology and add more detail here - gender, age, ethnicity?
3. Emma - you met deadline, but this is far too brief, especially media language and representation sections.  Look at the others for the type of detail needed.

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