Emma, Amelia, Charlie,
Well done - the blog is shaping up to be level 4 evidence of group planning and concept development. Your pitch demonstrated that you had worked extremely hard to research forms and conventions and that you had considered all angles of your treatment and character motivation. There were gaps, however on technical ideas, however you have reflected on this and using recces and test shooting, you are working though issues related to the train station location, amount of content you had planned for 2 minutes and other complexities in your initial pitch. Nevertheless, it is better to have a wide range of ideas and cut it down, than the opposite. Final point about the pitchl in future, make sure that you rehearse and plan timings carefully as yours did run on considerably and would have benefitted from editing.
In order to work towards level 4 planning - you should now:
1. post audience research, results and a reflection on how this informed your concept development
2. Tidy up blog - all posts should have highlighted key words, lots of still frame images / clips, colour to help read sub headings, avoid great long paragraphs, but instead break up to bullet points so that you demonstrate L4 use of ICT in presentation
3. evidence of your storyboarding and animatic, with titles
4. Clear reflection on how your treatment has changed
5. Amelia and Emma - technical analysis needs reflection at end and clear link between this process and your concept development
6. recce photos / images from shoots - make these post much more visual
You are using the blog well to document what you are doing each lesson, however you also need to include detail on how your concept is developing and changing. Stills from footage taken and what you have learnt from it would be very useful evidence.